Monday, October 22, 2012

Writing-Describing a character



She looks like a clown because she has a white face. She also has pink lips and orange hair.She is also a  big fan of tea and she has a big spooty tie, have I mentioned her eyebrows are attached to her hair? And also a tag on her hat as well, is it stolen?
 By SAMUEL.

THIS IS MY DRAFT PIECE OF WRITING PLEASE LEAVE ME A COMMENT SO THAT I CAN MAKE IT BETTER NEXT TIME.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Sam its Mac here,
    looks like you've been learning something awesome. What's your character's name? What's your character from?


    From Mac from RM8

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